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PianoFortress

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hmmmm

it's a good song as long as you are happy with it...that's what I do music for. To compose a song that's 100% me =D.

About this song now...well it's very downtempo but that's perfectly okay. The clear piano is a nice addition to all the effect pads, etc. plus it plays a happy melody :D...so far good job!

Xyirx responds:

Ah, I remember you! You're the one who composed "Skywards". I love listening to it all the time because it's so soothing.

Anyway, I'm very happy that you enjoy listening to this. I bet I've got some inspiration from you too.

high five!!

I like it. yes. nice beat although it's a loop. but I'm also working with drum loops haha :D...this song has a very futuristic atmosphere. I would change last few seconds of the song though...because it really cuts off at the end and I don't like that!!!!!!111...do a fade-out or something...

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Oh hey pianoForte! You haven't reviewed one of my songs in a while! Well, I am very glad you like this song. Oh and the fade out I was trying to attempt, cut off all od a sudden and I couldn't change it! 0_0 Well, that is really annoying lol. Thanks for the review. =P Oh and you wouldn't believe THIS but TWO OF MY SONGS ARE ON THE TOP OF THE AMBIENT LIST!!!! In fact, they are #1 and #2!!! They have been there for 2 days so farand I hope they stay there to. I worked extremly hard and I finally reached my dream goal... like you did. =) I see a pattern here... lol. Well, good luck with your upcoming songs, and I hope you help me keep those songs there! (Towards the Sun::) =FINAL= and (::Come::) =FINAL=

Yeah, I remixed them so they say FINAL. =P

hmmm

First you should work on the background noise. it's overcompressed and causes this damn fuzz so you cannot really enjoy the melody at all. my second complain is that the "strings" are very loud. might be just my personal taste but I think ambient songs should be calm, relaxing and be able to creates imagines in your head. but with those strings it's just like BAM BAM BAM all the time. no time to breath between them. a more silent / muted part mixed with the stringsparts would work very well I think.
I'm looking forward to your final product....

WritersBlock responds:

Hey, thanks for the review.
Yeah, I'll have to tweak the background, and tone it down in parts.
I turned up the strings that much because I was afraid it would get drowned out with the atmosphere layer, but if I turn that down, I should be able to turn the strings down a bit too. I should play around with their volume, add a bit of variation. I kind of went for a bit of a more powerful orchestral sound which kind of make it less calm and ambient, but a bit of control over that should keep it fairly calm. I'm thinking of adding a quiet section in the middle, so I think that should mix it up a bit. I'm thinking of a soft pizzicato string bridge kind of thing.
Thanks for your comments again.

WB

hmmm

PIANO FOR WORLD DOMINATION...and chart domination .___.

MJTTOMB responds:

YES! HEIL PIANO! Down with the violin.l grrrr...

Tonight, we dine in Carnegie Hall!

xD

Lol, thanks man. I've been needing to say that for a loooong time.

gettin' closer...

this one is definitely better than your other techno song. 1:30 there we go that's a nice pad! very simple arrangement with only 2 chords so far but you've composed a good mix at 2:19...I also like the change from bright to dark beat at 00:50...

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Oh cool! I'm glad you realized the symbolicness (That's not a word!!!) of this song!

hmmmm

I'm missing the techno in this techno song LOL...something like a fast, hardcore beat and big ass-kickin' pad leads...or bright pads...sounds more like the new wave thingy you did.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

ehh, your right. =( I though it sounded pretty cool, but not that many people are in for that taste.

hmmmm

better than my very first song lol...which I won't upload here anyway =P...good song though you've made. can't judge very much. clean sound, chords fit, pretty good mix of the different synths and the piano towards the end!...

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Cool! I like it when people think my songs are smooth. =P

hmmmm

this high pitch noise cuts through my ears like a knife...damn it. the subbass at 00:50 seems a bit overcompressed...1:30 again...or maybe you did that on purpose? You've used some more effects and voices towards the end that's good...creates a little climax =).

lol germans!

ziemlich geiler song!...ich geb dir mal 5 öcken, dann geht's weiter nach oben =D

DarKsidE555 responds:

lol germans, they are everywhere! XD

Danke! Freut mich das es gefallen hat. Werd mich revanchieren. ^^

sinister...

wow perfect dark atmosphere, good job! you could even add some strings to emphasize some parts of the song...like before 3:15...the fast part. or a solo violin for the soft passages.

MJTTOMB responds:

I'd really love to.

But sadly, It's a piano suite, and I wanna try to keep it so that nothing more than a piano and a pianist is needed.

But yeah.

Ther than functionality purposes, I may want to play around a bit with it and upload it to ng.

i like coooooooooookies!

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