It's cool, I like it. Simple with enough variations to keep it interesting.
Would have went for a slightly more powerful impact at the 1:57 transition by going slightly quiter beforehand. The end-transition at 2:30 is what I think of. Could use a bit more punch there aswell, so that the song ends on a remarkable impact. That's what I would do.
Could imagine someone narrating over this.
I throw all my stars at you!
Well, I guess this one is pretty solid as being your first submission. And it serves it's purpose I can imagine.
Awesome! I'd kill for such a voice..................mmmmmmmmmyes
Sounds violent, you do know that murder as a payment form is... outdated, yes? I have a Paypal for such purposes.
But seriously, thanks!
Lovely track man. Also, the stuff you did for Lucky Day Forever was amazing!
you so boss like!
this is le pro. Though listen to the first half already satisfies me.
Cool story bro!
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